Monday, October 22, 2012

Writing on a Historical Photograph DRAFT

This man appears to be really angry, an agitated spirit, who stands in austerity. His gesture is emphatic, bold and unforgiving. His index finger points to his audience in a forceful manner and appeases no one, as veins protrude from his forehead and the stare blazes with hatred and indignation. But, what does he speak for? His language appears ferocious, exacting a message that is clear and absolute. But, what does he speak for? Is it equality or justice? Perhaps, revenge or retribution? Maybe, peace and truth? The media of his time portrayed him a killer, racist and disturber of the peace. Whose peace? 

Reading Description of "Across the Wire"

Urrea's Across the Wire, is a poignant story of life in the "dompes" (dumps) along the Tijuana/San Diego border. In it, Urea describes his acquaintance with various people and families, living in these dumps, often in raw detail, documenting their incomprehensible plights. I became quite intrigued with the story because I cannot conceive living so inhumanely, and yet Urea shares his characters' story with as much dignity as the context could possibly allow. Across the Wire, conveys a repulsive environment devised of "scabies...dump rats...and feces" set-up alongside, a pit wherein "the city drops off its dead animals-dogs, cats, sometimes goats, horses...[to be] torched." What makes this imagery even more astonishing is the hierarchy of station, between the residents, which accompanies it. Even in the most dire of circumstances humans always find ways to establish a socio-cultural order and more often than not, the people therein are inevitably ranked according to whatever measure is established.

Take into account, Dona Araceli, "the Cheese Lady" who was somewhat of an advocate for new and poorer  families (if there is such a thing in these parts) moving into the dompe, and emphatically made it her business to assure that there were houses built for them. And then there are "the Serrano's" a stereotypical family comprised of a mother, father, two boys and a little girl, and another baby on the way. Yet, Mrs. Serrano was stricken with such dehydration that it was thought the baby would never make it to full gestation. Urea, and his colleagues help the mother by prescribing medications to her but are quickly refused by her husband because they "can't read." Mrs. Serrano was then instead given an anti-diarrea medication and "jugs of Gatorade..water..and some clothes." The living conditions that the Serrano's and other families endure are unimaginable and yet they function just as such, to the point where even their sexual appetites are hardly quelled and they often increase the size of their families in spite of the poverty they are stricken with. Families of the dompe love fiercely, endure the madness of eating "meat that is not too rotten to be cooked", and find the finest luxuries in other people's waste. Moreover, they hold tight to their pride and push through it like a lawnmower through grass. As better explained by Urea, "the poor don't feel the compunction to play the humble and quiet role we assign them in our minds." At least, the people of the San Diego/Tijuana dompe that Urea describes surely do not.

The saddest story in Across the Wire was that of Jesusita and her family. Urea describes her as a loved one, perhaps an "aunt" or endearing relative who held a demeanor that could disarm the hardest of souls. Jesusita, was somewhat of a celebrity around town attending church service and bible studies.  Such an environment even had a church institutionalized within it which proves even further the tenacity of the human spirit. Unfortunately, Jesusita's and her husband would be made to endure a terrible murder by thugs of the community, forcing their children from their home, never to be found again. All of these different elements of society and life built right into a place of "miasma" and filth and yet these families and countless others go on as if there is no hope and that all is meant to be as it is, fully functional however debilitating the long-term effects are.              

Sunday, October 7, 2012

"Author's Note"



He emerges from the stairs, “what the hell am I gonna do with 75 cents? You can’t even buy a cup of coffee with 75 cents these days! I ain’t worried God is good and he will repay me!” Just then a man exits the McDonald's and hands him over a fresh meal and coffee, “here you go man, God bless you.” “For me?!” he jumped in ecstasy, pointing at us, exclaiming emphatically, “I told you so!! I told you so! God is good! Aw, man I cannot believe this, thank you Jesus!” He then sat in his favorite spot, began to giddily chow down, eyes and smile beaming the whole time with a face as if to say, I'm the man. 

I was inspired to write this story because it speaks to a time in my life when things were carefree and although the moments written of are clear snapshots of my memory, the framework which they exist in are as hazy as a hot summer day and make them really special to me. I did not have any specific literature in mind when I wrote this, I just wanted to veer off the beaten path. I am so used writing about my past, life story, experiences, blah, blah, blah and it is getting old, especially because I am dead smack in the middle of my transfer workup and that is all I am currently writing about. I have never written short stories before and find the format quite relaxing and much different from the rigidity of poem, academic and required writing. I am trying to uncover and realize other dimensions of writing like humor, dialogue, and perhaps fiction too. I find that my ideas flowed much more freely writing this piece which made it really fun. I was always an avid believer in traditional writing i.e brainstorming, jotting ideas, writing and revising all with a pen and have only recently given in to the evolution of writing and speaking to a small screen in order to organize my thoughts. I find it fast and convenient which is a far cry from my stance on this tradition 2 years ago (just ask my son), I cannot believe I tortured him about that! 

I hope to develop this story with more vivid detail and maybe even embellish a little humor and dialogue so as to enlighten and enliven this piece over the semester. This time around its no more sad stories but fun, thrilling, and suspenseful albeit still real and truthful records on the horizon.